Wednesday, April 2, 2014

[war] Boy In An Envelope..... [war (Vietnam 'Conflict') : A Parent's Loss; Condolences; Very Long, But Worth The Time] Comments

Rating: 4.9

The long envelope was addressed to Mr. Robert K. Hess.
One corner was torn away.....and it lacked a return address.
I’d just received it that day, with a batch of others;
it was a light mail-day; some days the volume smothers.
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Bri Edwards 07 November 2024

To all who have or will read and esp. to those who have and will leave a comment or more, I GIVE THANKS. bri edwards aka Brian Edward Whitaker (in 'The Other World') . : ) bri

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2) " Ten years I've been without a son, but, for him, I'm still filled with pride." The poor citizens are hoodwinked by the rulers to fight their wars in the name of patriotism. ….

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I tend to identify "Vietnam war" with the photograph of a tiny girl stark naked running.. running away from the fire spewed by Napalm Bomb …. I wish the US is made to pay for its SINs. But gods are crazy these days

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Kim Barney 30 October 2024

It was nice to re-read this. One of your better poems, Bri. Perhaps you were subconsciously thinking of our mutual friend Hank Beuning when you used the name Hank in your poem. Hank DID serve in Vietnam and came back in one piece.

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Koffi B Sossou 29 October 2024

I didn't notice the length of the poem until I finished reading it. Bri is talkative, but he knows how to keep you up. Lol

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Koffi B Sossou 29 October 2024

Avidity of power, self-interest have been the trigger for most wars in the world. And the warfighers who could be a son, oncle, brother...are most of the time objectified on the battle field.

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Koffi B Sossou 29 October 2024

This poem depicts the reality. It reminds of a book I read 'Where Cowards Go to Die'.

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Bri Edwards 29 October 2024

I just reread my poem and 'notes'. As I was writing more comments, I think PH had 'other ideas'. Anyway, always a Thank YOU! to readers and even more so (a little more) for commenters. : )

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Bharati Nayak 29 October 2024

A really heart touching write! In the present scenario when our world iswar ravaged, there may be thousands of soldiers laying their lives and parents and relatives get news of their demise through

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Cowboy Ron Williams 16 November 2023

A bit long, but the story is strong. The horrors of war are all too real. Stories just like this have really happened.

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Bharati Nayak 28 April 2022

I have added it to my 'Favorite' list as it would be easier to comeback and read it again.

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bri edwards 21 July 2022

Thanks, Bharati. bri ;)

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Kim Barney 27 April 2022

A fascinating story, Bri. Kept me absorbed throughout.

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bri edwards 21 July 2022

Absorbed? Like into a sponge? I KNOW what ya mean, my friend. Thanks. bri : )

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Bharati Nayak 27 April 2022

It is not a story, it is a painful reality! Thanks Bri, sharing this touching poem.

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Bharati Nayak 27 April 2022

A really touching write! When countries fight, the soldiers are to die, it does not matter to which country they belong.A father loses a son, a wife loses her husband or a sister loses her brother.

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2023

So true! ; (

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Valentin Savin 06 October 2018

Bri, I somehow acquainted with such kind of letters which came from the fronts of the World War Two. But those murdered and died fought for the liberty of their country. It is difficult to write poems about such kind of things. I quite understand your feelings, Bri, when you wrote about the death of the soldier sent to the alien country to defend, as he was probably taught and convinced, the American democracy. Val

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2023

My understanding was that the U.S. was fighting to keep communist China from advancing in SE Asia, though I'm pretty sure some Americans had vested interests in that area

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Darwin Henry Beuning 30 October 2017

Bri, a very sad read, brought back memories sooooo long ago. I rate a 10

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Kim Barney 30 October 2024

Hank, it was so nice of you to send that letter about Tom. Too bad the dog tags didn't make it. I guess you should have turned them in to your commanding officer instead of keeping them.

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Bri Edwards 02 April 2014

well, dog tag was not meant to be in smaller print at the end of my note, but that's what happened. arf. arf. :) bri

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Douglas Scotney 02 April 2014

worth it, Bri. The occasional humorous rhyme interested me in the sense that it made me think of the place of humour in the serious business that is life. I suppose someone took those dog tags thinking they were coins.

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