War And The Elusive Peace Comments

i like that you mentioned tanks, bombs, and rockets each twice. not only do i like the sound of it for some reason, but it is kind of a picture of wars or what wars have been in years gone by. unfortunately, though your appeal to peace is very well done, i doubt it will have any influence on our futures.....at least not on battlefields. i think generals do what they are supposed to do. the politicians, diplomats, citizens at home, and commercial ventures are likely to be the ones who find peaceful solutions to conflicts. nice thoughts you have.

We hunger for peace so much but world peace is still a sweet dream. The atrocities of war is vivid in your poem. Beautiful write