Tuesday, October 9, 2012

War And Sin Comments

Rating: ★5.0

As the blood drips
on the carcasses of hell
a storm draws near

The war as begun
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Dave Alan Walker
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Karen Sinclair 22 October 2012

Great title and write of meaning although i think we live in it already....tyvm karen

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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2012

A dark and disturbing read, could be seen literally or metaphorically, Hell is our own creation.

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Asif Andalib 16 October 2012

A short but great poem against war. God bless you Dave

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Eric Cockrell 11 October 2012

and we are both the cause and the effect!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 October 2012

Hell is coming for our sins! You may be right, but where? on the land of poor?

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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Pudsey, Leeds
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