Brothers and sisters all over here fighting
Got me thinking so much now im writing
Why is there so much hate in the world
Seeing all this killing makes my stomach curl
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. All of your poems, Daniel, paint a portrait of 'Just how, War is! ', but, this poem, is surely one of my favorites. The first two lines act like a magnet...to draw readers in. The last two lines...left me speechless! Excellent motor-boost for the consciousness, in us all. (A 10+ + +...for you!) Deanna xx .
i really dont like watching the news because everytime i turn it on all i hear is about all the innocent people dying and that is so sad.
Phenomenal poem. What bugs me is that the media only focuses on the bad things that happen but never focuses on the good thing the military does.