War And Child....(01) Comments

this poem, obviously is very sad and well written, I'll give you 10/10! Thank you for your comments on my poems, I appreciate!

Beautifully sad, well written.

artist man, your patriotic feelings are exceptional. good work.

very dramatic description of terrorism eating up lives, , , good work indeed

Hi raihan, good job. Actually i always write love related poems either for happy moments or sad, but reading ur poem have really touched me a lot. great job

A dreadful poetic narration in eloquence. Such agony for the child to witness into his own eyes the death of his father and the terror he had experienced that made a curve and slash to his own self....Thanks!

Very sad. If you can find the time read 'Confrontation'.

A sad story, well told but it would greatly benefit by some (Bach or Haendel style) music.

the story inside the poem is really happening..tho it ends wth a sorrowful setting but this is well express...the child perhaps didnt understand the situation but as he grows old, he is more open to every situation like what u are expressing in ur poem..

The effect of what you've penned here..is of the true sorrow what accures...it remains with us forever.....well penned my friend...deep and touching write

Touching and very regretful. Great poem wel penned. 10

Horrible and painful reality skilfully conveyed, such powerful picture you paint with words.

Your right about the suddenness, made me think of Viet Nam

another stunning blow to humanity, which apparently is dead. horrible. pl continue even if it is horrible to read some time some one might see it. voted10 surya

I'm so sad for the boy! War is not an instrument of peace and still kings and presidents make war sometimes because of their own personal agenda! If you have read my poems 'In the Midst of Diversity' and 'To The People Where Freedom Exists, I write' it has a theme close to this and I wrote it to avoid war and to oppose the idea of slavery and abuse.

A sad and brutal picture of present day's reality.

Powerful descriptive write an insight into a world that is becoming far to common and demands attention from those who care.

unbelievable amazing write very powerful 10