Sunday, March 30, 2014

War Comments

Rating: 3.8

Sun shines, fire glows
Death rains, arrows of fire in modern bows

Missiles and rockets, bombs dropped from on high
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Darlene Walsh
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Terry Dawson 15 January 2016

We fight wars to protect the values that we cherish from those who would take them from us, and unfortunately form time to time this is necessary. But yes, war is most brutal and relentless and remorseless and very terrible.

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Abdallah Gamal 15 August 2015

War is destructive, nations deceive innocent people that war is an obligation to let the peace lay down. Wars never end and will not end, but I think if Innocent people like you talk about its horrible consequence, the world will be a better place. Again I'm amazed by the powerful ink you write with! It's magical! Keep it up ;) This time I will take a permission from you to share it on my own page on Facebook :) Rated 10+

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Allotey Abossey 27 May 2015

Great write. War is destructive, good for nothing worth nothing. God bless you

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Amitava Sur 10 January 2015

A very thoughtful write expressing serious concern about the outcome of any war. In deed war doesn't beget any good to mankind except misery.

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i really wish all nations would ban WAR! ! good poem..good point.

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Patricia Grantham 18 June 2014

A powerful and meaning write about the ravages of war. In the end nobody really wins. Inspiring.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 May 2014

Darleen, that was an awesome, powerful piece, good work! Loyd

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Susan Sparks 02 April 2014

I feel the same way about war. Very good writing.

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Jay Hall 30 March 2014

Nie work. Keep writing.

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