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War Shakil Ahmed
21-6-2014
War comes and goes
Leaving scars behind
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Melvina Germain 30 October 2015

The last line definitely sums it up...War can not bring any good...yet supposed intelligent me solve issues by bringing forth war, it never helps as it takes innocent lives and ruins bodies, torn and disfigured but no one learns from that as it is done over and over again. Great change is needed. Your poem speaks an abundance of truth and I love when poet stacks the deck with truth...Thank you.....

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Yinka Meander 30 June 2015

I love this poem. this is super Shakil!

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