Monday, August 28, 2017

War - 28 (Haiku) Comments

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War is a Doklam plateau

Encouraging Buddha's kids this side to provoke
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 December 2017

And force Gandhi's kids on the other. Thanks sir very nice haiku10++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 12 November 2017

War is a Doklam plateau Encouraging Buddha's kids this side to provoke And force Gandhi's kids on the other. Beautiful haiku sir...10++++for the poem

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 21 October 2017

Encouraging Buddha's kids this side to provoke And force Gandhi's kids on the other. Nicely penned

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Anita Aparajita Das 29 August 2017

War is a Doklam plateau Encouraging Buddha's kids this side to provoke And force Gandhi's kids on the other. It's a burning issue of the month. At Doklam plateau, the Buddha's kids are trying to build roads against the will of the Gandhi's kids and trying to provoke a war like situation. This must be avoided. Nice haiku.10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 29 August 2017

War is a Doklam plateau Encouraging Buddha's kids this side to provoke And force Gandhi's kids on the other. Beautiful haiku sir.. Our people are Gandhi's and the Chinese are the Buddha's, but both are Asian kids. They should not fight a war. Nice message. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++ for the poem.

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Sabita Sahoo 29 August 2017

Apes are the primates Who loved to sit all idly through their span.. Of life on the trees. Yes the recent events near Bhutan where the lovers of Buddha tried to evade the land of Gandhi's. Great haiku, poet. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++

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