Thursday, August 24, 2017

War - 26 (Haiku) Comments

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War is a blurring scratch

On the looking glass of mankind
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Rajendra Rout 14 November 2017

War is a blurring scratch On the looking glass of mankind Moving ahead with a high pace.lovely haiku shairing.....10+++++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a blurring scratch On the looking glass of mankind Moving ahead with a high pace. Yes you need a clear farsight to go ahead. Blurred by war. 10 for the haiku.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a blurring scratch On the looking glass of mankind Moving ahead with a high pace. War blurs the futuristic vision of a progressive nation. Nice alarming message. Thanks for the haiku. 10+.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a blurring scratch On the looking glass of mankind Moving ahead with a high pace. Moving at a high pace demands a crystal clear vision. It must not be blurred. Nice haiku.10+.

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Thanks Sabita for the comments.

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

War is a blurring scratch On the looking glass of mankind Moving ahead with a high pace. A pacing nation should have a crystal clear vision, which is blurred by the war. Thanks for this beautiful haiku.

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Thanks Neetu for your kind remarks.

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