Thursday, August 24, 2017

War - 24 (Haiku) Comments

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War is a killing hole

On the Titanic of Civilization
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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a killing hole On the Titanic of Civilization Moving along the Atlantic of Time Wow..The Titanic of civilization... Nice.10+++.

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Bharati Nayak 26 August 2017

What amazing write! ! Thank you for sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a killing hole On the Titanic of Civilization Moving along the Atlantic of Time The titanic drowned due to a hole, in the Atlantic..and so would a nation if the hole of war is not stopped. Nice haiku. 10+++ for this poem.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a killing hole On the Titanic of Civilization Moving along the Atlantic of Time The civilization Titanic would drown in the Ocean of war. Beautiful imagery. Thanks.10+++

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

War is a killing hole On the Titan of Civilization Moving along the Atlantic of Time Like the Titanic drowned in the Atlantic, war causes such havoc with the civilization. Thanks for the haiku.10 for it.

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