Wednesday, April 8, 2009

War Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thunder rolls in the distance
like drums of a heartbeat
stomping through the veins of
humanity
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Melissa L. Pelletier
COMMENTS
Jerry Hughes 25 December 2009

Excellent Mel, it's a pity so few feel as (we) do about the futility of war, and the bastards who promote it. With respect, Jerry

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Eyan Desir 10 July 2009

Beautifully written....Melissa

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John Johnson 20 April 2009

I really enjoyed this one

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Bob Gibson 19 April 2009

fathers killing mother's son breeding everlasting hate. A great ending to a sad poem, will they ever learn?

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

great poem.. it makes u think nice job!

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Killing Hope 09 April 2009

Good poem, with a thought.

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Delphi Arbor 08 April 2009

makes me feel mad in the good way

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