Sunday, March 15, 2009

War Comments

Rating: 5.0

I often wonder about my house,
About floorboards, the stair case and mum’s hot scouse.
I often wonder about the world,
About flowers, trees and petals that curl.
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Anthony Foster 09 April 2009

Very readable and understandable piece of discriptive writng all the more hard hitting as its the truth.

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Wojja Fink 28 March 2009

what would you do if you had the choice? sing it from rooftops in a scoucer's voice sing it at school or perhaps in the bath but please don't forget how the Beatles used to laugh.....John

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Chitra - 18 March 2009

poignant, so many hard hitting questions to the worst evil that mankind has ever created...nice poem

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