Friday, February 10, 2006

War Comments

Rating: 5.0

Human mistakes,
lead to many breaks.
Families unmatched,
within shameless acts.
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martha shaw
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Uriah Hamilton 15 March 2006

It makes me think everything is dark, keep writing! !

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William Jackson 14 March 2006

Your poem is very raw. I like it. It makes me think that home is the last place war should occur.

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