Wednesday, August 23, 2017

War - 15 (Haiku) Comments

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War is a border

Thrust upon hearts and minds who loved
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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 August 2017

War is a border Thrust upon hearts and minds who loved To live and let live. War is the evil who created borders between minds of people. Nice concept. 10+

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Seema Sharma Rimi 24 August 2017

War is a border Thrust upon hearts and minds who loved To live and let live. Yes war has been the gravest means to raise a border. It separates mind and heart in stead of tuning with them. Nice haiku..10+++ for the liottle poem

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Anita Aparajita Das 24 August 2017

War is a border Thrust upon hearts and minds who loved To live and let live. War has killed so many and would kill in future so many. No one can escape its evil consequences. Thanks for this sharing.10++ for it.

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Sabita Sahoo 24 August 2017

War is a border Thrust upon hearts and minds who loved To live and let live. Yes war kills the prospect of peaceful coexistence. 10 for the nice haiku.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 August 2017

A meaningful write. War is never good. A good underlying message of peace n harmony for the reader.

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Thank you madam for your great inspirational remark.

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