Wednesday, November 12, 2008

War Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unpremeditated, just a reflexive blink,
Was not as startled as the glitter of grime
Against the sun-streaked light.
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Abraham de la Torre
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Eyan Desir 25 February 2009

anyone the know poetry will say this was a good write. but there are normal ppl.tht know know certain things about poetry. I could give this poem a 10 but some1 might have a different oppinion not the best I have seen but good 10s

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Meggie Gultiano 26 November 2008

an excellent piece. I love this

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Hunter Dasten 13 November 2008

You managed to articulate the uncertainty of war very well. Truly a fantastic write. Keep up the good work my friend!

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Ency Bearis 12 November 2008

wonderful simile poem...eloquent verses well delivered...excellent..A10+ Ency Bearis

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Abraham de la Torre

Abraham de la Torre

Bacacay, Albay, Philippines
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