Tuesday, August 22, 2017

War - 12 (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

War is a dark chalk that strikes

Through the bright, white, age-old sentences
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2017

It is sad that, our minds as Human Beings turn out this Way. Only with hatred and war! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. War is a dark chalk putting off the values of heritage. Nicely written haiku. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 26 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. A black paint on our heritage...true. 10++.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. Beautiful haiku. The chalk strikes through the bright sentences of heritage. 10++.

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Anita Aparajita Das 23 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. What a nice analogy Subhas! Thanks.10.

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