Tuesday, August 22, 2017

War - 09 (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

War is a poison injected

Into the veins of a dreaming Civilization
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Mayurakshi Ojha 04 December 2017

War is a poison injected Into the veins of a dreaming Civilization Leaving it no choice to awaken. Poisons from the snake of war would kiill the love binding people and building a nation. Truly said. 10++++

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D Priyanka Singh 30 November 2017

War is a poison injected Into the veins of a dreaming Civilization Leaving it no choice to awaken. Poisons from the snake of war would kiill the love binding people and building a nation. Truly said.10 mark DP

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 August 2017

War is a poison injected Into the veins of a dreaming Civilization Leaving it no choice to awaken. Beautiful write, war is poisoning the whole humanity. 10+++.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2017

Brilliant write... War is a poison injected.. wonderful imaginary. Beautiful haiku on war and peace.

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Sabita Sahoo 23 August 2017

War is a poison injected Into the veins of a dreaming Civilization Leaving it no choice to awaken. Poisons from the snake of war would kiill the love binding people and building a nation. Truly said.10 marks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 23 August 2017

War is a poison injected Into the veins of a dreaming Civilization True this venom has spoiled everything. Thanks for the poem.

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