Monday, August 21, 2017

War - 03 (Haiku) Comments

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War is a fishing net

Made to trap the fishes of love
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soumya 01 December 2017

War is a fishing net Made to trap the fishes of love from swimming across borders. Nice haiku.10+++++

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Rajendra Rout 21 November 2017

War is a fishing net Made to trap the fishes of love from swimming across borders. War restricts free movement across the borders Lovely haiku shairing 10+++++++++******

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 August 2017

War is a fishing net Made to trap the fishes of love from swimming across borders. War restricts free movement across the borders. Nice haiku. 10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 24 August 2017

War is a fishing net Made to trap the fishes of love from swimming across borders. Yes...war deprives the free birds or fishes to roam with a choice.It never liberates..rater enemies at war pretend many times and shed tears on various occasions. Like a fishing net it traps people across borers. 10+++ for his beautiful poem shared.

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Anita Aparajita Das 21 August 2017

a fishing net Made to trap the fishes of love from swimming across borders. Wow, a fishing! The net disallows for the free ones to cross boundares created artificially. So war is a crime against liberation. 10 to award.

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Sabita Sahoo 21 August 2017

War is a fishing net Made to trap the fishes of love from swimming across borders. Yes, the fishes of love yearn to cross the borders, geographical, political, social and literary as well. But war puts an evil hurdle against them and tries to trap them. Thanks for the lovely Haiku. Let the Chinese people learn it. 10 for it.

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