Friday, July 5, 2013

Waqt! Comments

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Waqt k dosh pe
her baat ko daala na karo,
waqt ka kiya he
theher jaey to chalta hi nhi
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Shahzia Batool
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 May 2017

Shandaar Jawaab e aan ghazal hai. Jawaab nahin. Shukria.

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Yasmin Khan 07 July 2013

Very passionate and philosophical lines on Time. Time writes the story of life on the sand and it; s waves wash it forever.

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Neela Nath Das 06 July 2013

Waqt is my favourite subject.Time teaches us many things.Waqt sobkuch thik karenge jab waqt ayenge! Sahi he? Loved Shahzia very much.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 July 2013

Waqt k dosh pe her baat ko daala na karo Don't make excuse of time for everything. Nice advice for everyone. Please see my poems 'Time Knows Time' and 'Time's Come' which complement your poem. Thank you.

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Tribhawan Kaul 06 July 2013

Bahut sunder jazbaat hain waqt ke bhare mein.

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Passionate Reader 05 July 2013

Yes time has wings and goes by quickly leaving behind both good and bad memories. I agree with you, we can satisfy ourselves by putting all the blame on time and doing nothing but we don’t realize that we can make a difference in our lives whenever we want rather than waiting for the right time. A philosophical poem! ! ! waqt guzray ga, to hum sath guzar jaen gay waqt k dosh pe ik roz bikhar jaen gay! ! ! loved these lines! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2013

ek bollywood ki movie hai waqt. waqt se takatwar kuchh bhi nahi hai. nature me sab kuchh purana hai xcept waqt jo har pal aata hai aur akar chala jata hai. koi ise muthhi mein bandh nahi paya ise. waqt insaan se kuchh bhi karwa sakta hai. a realistic poem. grand write.

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