Saturday, January 4, 2020

Wants To Go With Me (Haiku) Comments

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cold dawn departure...

grandson cries to go with me,
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Denis Mair
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Queeny Gona 15 January 2020

Holding shoes to the chest shows his immense urge to go with me. One can understand how much attached he is to you on spending some time with you!

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Unwritten Soul 10 January 2020

Sounds cute and what else...it is heartwarming to witness heart to heart bonding! .

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Bharati Nayak 05 January 2020

Wow- Separation from a loving Grandfather must be painful for a 20 month old child who does not know the intricacies of life.You have painted the picture powerfully in this Haiku.

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