Wanton Woman Comments

Hi Meggie Angel - Intriguing Title - lovely poem - I score it TEN. Verse One: Women have great power over men over society - it is based on beauty, brians, breeding and often their degree of 'wantoness' as Courtesans as Escourts as Trophy Brides of the Rich & famous as Class A List Party Women. We do envy them - but in the end they are only human and in a time of crisis they always turn to the Pure &Spiritual Woman (like you Meggie!) for help. Verse Two: The Weaknes and the Vanity is both with the Wanton Woman and the one alongside to hepl - it is a moral dilema but we can't be too judgemental in the end it is US. We walk together the Sinner & the Saint - Green is the neutral colour and has more shades than any other colour so it enables the weak (morally) and the strong (morally) to walk togther and blend. One seeking comfort and the other giving comfort but also getting a frisson from the association 'a FAN' or - as becomes a good Counsellor 'Just an avid listener'. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

Gods have no business in a wanton woman. Gods are only the mental making of man and if any god has had any business with a wanton woman, then, it is only the business of man. Once we fix the identity of god as pure and eternal, he cannot be limited as having all the whims and fancies of a man. Wanton woman- in life, any kind of person is possible. Actually, who abandons whom? So long as empathy is missing in us, this can be an eternal story.

Could this be a weakness Or just vanity For i know in the end It would be us Walking in shades of green For comfort and a fan Or just an avid listener.no wonder we all know womanhas decisive role to play.. i love the woman to the extent that they inseprable part of life and can't be disregarded aor washed away... i like the spirit of the poem....10 read mine o, mother...mom i miss u...mom i cry eventoday... mother and i wept....

no wonders why all readers and poets liked this piece, , its really so amazing.. short and full of amazing meanings.. congratulations! hazem al..

Your wanton woman glitters with mystery and glamour. No wonder she received applause. May I add mine as well? Excellent, my dear friend. Love, SandraX

How i envy your beauty Yet cry for your sorrows Lovely piece of poetry... Insightful and skillfully composed...10 +++

So rich with meaning Meggie my lovely....beautiful composition...one many will enjoy I'm sure....excellent work as always 10

a great poem with great meaning.nicely composed.voted10 surya

It is a very well-defined portrait with a highly critical thinking, a poem belonging to symbolism, where this symbolic wanton woman is like an algorithm of all wanton women.Thank you for sharing..........10+++++++

This is one of the best poems from you, Meggie. A poem with insight and lots of input. Outcome is very very meaningful. Thanks for bringing it to my attention otherwise I could have missed it........10/10. Regards Naseer

Fame is but fleeting moments in the end we are only human. Loved this one Meggie 10/10

An interesting write Meggie, gets better with each read. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

This is a very well written and meaningful poem, Meggie. A real joy to read.Thanks Richard

An excellent write Meggie, thanks for the read, 10 Lynda xx

Women get that fear when the men stop looking.

Meggie This poem has a great resolution and takes you on a journey of emotions in so doing. Your insight is superb and congratulations for your win! . Karin Anderson 10 from me

From: Ben Gieske (United States ;) To: Meggie Gultiano Date Time: 3/31/2009 3: 40: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Re: Re: Re: WANTON WOMAN Meggie, congratulations with this winning poem. I can understand why it was a chosen winner with all of its symbolism as well as your expressing your inner feelings and emotions. A poem is best when it is not immediately apparent and demands the reader to meditate on its deeper meanings. Ben

Thought provoking and well written! ! Bravo to youy and God bless.

a lovely sentimental write..the end was eexceptional

beautiful sentiment, well done, thanks for sharing 10