Wanton Profusion Of Life Comments

Nice but a bit melancholic. But we must admit that it is the truth of life sometimes. God bless you.

I get from this that every life has joy and sorrow but you should focus on the joy over sorrow... Good write

A good write Sheldon, you bring out the difficult situations very well in this well crafted piece on the profusion of life..Thanks for inviting me to read your work

awwww.... so good... love it

Lovely piece.It truly speaks about the truth of life. Keep writing.

Very nice it was a pleasure to read

a wonderful write. you maintained the form and you gave a good poem

This describes well the profusion life can present Sheldon and you have, expecially in the first two verses, captured that feel of angst when there becomes too much of too much. Well written insightful piece.

A poem that speaks to the complexity of life's circumstances that one has to endure or overcoming....learn to change the things that's worth changing or learn to adjust self to the unchanged. I like the poem Sheldon -this 10

I think its good. Time does heal the wounds but we have no patience. When we look back at the old scars memories are revived and sometimes painful all over again. Thanks for sharing