Saturday, January 26, 2008

*wanting What I Have Vs. Having What I Want Comments

Rating: 3.4

how often have I thought I knew what happiness was?
always in the future, just beyond my reach.
how many times have I arrived at my destination
to realize something is still wanting?
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shannon wright
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This poem while well-written really stands out for its common sense, wise message. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

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Roger Cornish 28 January 2008

Deep and interesting... Wonderful work..... Rogerx.

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Is happiness necessarily ephemeral? I've often thought that, though, when I grasp it in my hand I feel such delight. In any event, I enjoyed this work and I will likely come back later to read it again. Peace, L&T

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