Wanting What I Can`t Have. Comments

Ah Brandi, This is a grand poem indeed... superb descriptions and word use to detail how you are feeling, from the gut-wrenching and angry built up inside waiting to be unleashed. Great flow to this one as well. Nice written... the frustration is apparent here but the whole poem gels so well, and yes the wanting of someone you cannot have is bad, and can lead to bitterness and hostility towards the target. Envy in all its green might... The hulk springs out lol! You say at the end though that she can't love him as true as you can... is that what you are thinking, even though He is not your man... or isn't he? An little bit of respite on the something you can't have. The play on words is superb. A really good poem Brandi, and just think... it is his loss lol! Dale :)

Sometimes you just have to bite the bullet - so they say, or grin and bare it.