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She wore him like an embellishment
His masculinity aided her femininity.
She needed all the help she could muster.
Self centered, selfish, narcissistic.
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 14 December 2017

No, i don't think this is about you. mostly because you write, i believe, about an adulterous woman, and 'who in their right mind' would write about themselves in this way? ! and NOW i'll look at another poem. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2017

i think to poem is magnificent! oh! i just read the topics listed by you. i hope this does not indicate a problem in YOUR life, but just a keen 'imagination'. if the former, good luck! divorce is sometimes the better choice, though it can be excrutiating (for some; not for me) . to MyPoemList. time for one more..................poem. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2017

well, Della, i'm glad to find some new poems on your site! but i have a problem with this line: She had no prolbme hanging him from the jewellery stand.................ha ha, hee-hee, :) some of this does sound down and dirty. just what i wanted tonight! (to be continued) ....

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