Sunday, October 16, 2011

Wanting Death Comments

Rating: 5.0

My body is unable to move,
Paralyzed by the Life I've tried to take away,
Sharp pains, pierce my heart,
Just like my life, its falling apart,
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Crimson Love
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Dianna Renate Evans 17 October 2011

u should never want death I love the poem tho its amazing! ! ! :)

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Stan Petrovich 17 October 2011

Yes, Meditate on 'Crimson' and eventually the true nature of the thing-in-itself will be understandable. By the way, I like this poem though depressing (in a present state of depressiion) .

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Broken Soul 17 October 2011

wow. the most amazing poem i have ever read. its so so awesome. just like how i feel constantly. me and you should be friends maybe we can help eachother. your an amazing writer. keep writing and dont let anyone stop you

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 16 October 2011

i totaly understand its like what the point in living in this messed up world where it seems like noone care but there is someone out there who cares and that will miss you iff u leave it that is what now my best friend tells me when i get close to wanting to die because i just cant stand life any more but i always get pulled out of it by my friend thank god for her couse if she wanst here i probly wouldnt be either

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Lenore Lee 16 October 2011

This is a spectacular poem, one which I can relate. I probably shouldn't give advice cause I'm going through the same thing, but don't give up hope. There are people who love you CL and there are people who care for Crimson, even if a few of them are on other sides of the world.

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