Saturday, March 31, 2007

Wanting And Searching Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to lay you down in fields of green
Make love to you till the morning rise
Take you to passions door as we slowly enter
Each step bring the unfolding of climax hill
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Patricia Gale
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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 September 2010

Yearning of a soft soul!

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rajagopal haran 25 November 2007

Love is always the fascinating subject; Great PoemPatricia

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 31 March 2007

Sigh... a lucky man that you rock... as far as this poem... You Rock!

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Francesca Johnson 31 March 2007

Oh, the passion in this poem.....now all you have to do is find THAT man... A yearning, wanting sort of poem. Well expressed, Patricia. Love, Fran xxx

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Marci Made 31 March 2007

This is a beautiful tribute to love as it should be....well done as always....mm

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