Tuesday, April 10, 2007
Wanted To Be What You Saw In Me Comments
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Wanted to be what you saw in me
Begged for night and day
Wanted to be all you asked of me
Fallen to my knees
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Sarah Loves
03 August 2007
The second and fourth paragraphs or whatever spell 'spilt.' Did you do that on purpose? Were you waiting for someone to bring that up to you? Maybe you didn't mean to at all. Clever though, whether conscious, or un-conscious. Good read. I give it a 9/10.
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And it was enough. I just didni't meet the requirments.