Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Wanted Comments

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Peace of mind,
And,
Love of a friend,
To remain forever,
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Khalid Saifullah 23 November 2017

Great thoughtful poem...................................................

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 October 2014

Appointment letter was issued, But the lovely candidate, Hasn't joined yet, The thankless job! An impressive stanza.

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Salini Nair 08 October 2014

fantastic thought....................nice

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Valsa George 07 October 2014

When people are tired of life, they often wish to invite death! But at times even Death refuses to come to their service! There are many such miserable cases when he seems to have deserted some and they languish in pain and despair! You have invited the attention of the readers to a great issue confronting the invalid! Great write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Beautiful Thoughts. Appointment with death? Poem with good flow and sincere application make this poem beautiful.

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Mohammad Skati 07 October 2014

It's a wonderful poem with a pretty message. Thanks.

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