Wanderlust Comments

Excellent imagery, Omar... the last four lines truly held me enchanted for quite sometime...Lovely!

This poem reminds me of my college days of great poets like Yeats.Thank you for sharing.

very nice, i really loved it....10 Hataw

A beautifully worded piece of verse Omar, well done, Andrew

Dear, ''Wander-Lust' is a mater piece. i don't know whether you had read any romantic poet from english literature. Sir, i feel the urge to yield oneself to the dreams of a union with beloved. It is as lovely as it needs to be on UNION. I would bit exaggerate to say - as some of people may object to my view point- that yearning is much better than what should be enjoyable in union. The true love is bit inconcievable. So, the true manifestations of dream.I feel, we have much amount of our energies invested in dreams. so, we must not bet it with union. However, Ishaque Samejo calls it - Rolak ji Diary (The diary of a wanderer) - as what you call as Wander Lust. Sir, Heard melodies are sweeter, those unheard are sweetest. [Keats] So, waiting for much more sweet thoughts.

lines mixed with love and emotions....great work...thanks for sharing....

My sort of poetry here Omar well done...By the way...Didn't know you were a 'Soap Dodger' Green or Blue? ... Best wishes Sid (For the uninitiated a Soap Dodger is what Edinburgh folk call their compatriots in Glasgow.) ..

Truly amazing piece of work. It blew me away.10!

Wow Very very artistically written. You have talent :)

Astounding in its simplistic beauty. A true treasure of a write.

it's a very romantic composition.. loved it.. :)

Absolutely delightful!

Omar so very very romantic. Oh if all our heart's desires could come true! I loved it and thank you for sharing it with me. Karin Anderson

no love expressed like this ever seen! good poem Omar...mellowing and sweetly romantic...10

With such dedication, it sounds like your friend is very lucky. Beautiful poem. Hugs, Dee

MM.. soo nice romantic and emotional..! ! thnks for sharing it

Omar, Fine display is sincere than feelings... for my 10... Thanks for sharing, Tsira

So Romantic, forceful and commanding, with positive intention..Great....10

its a very beautiful write indeed and surely is a best dedication...i loved it, thanks for sharing 10+++++++...and added to my favs rgds asif

wow it's amazing i luv it so much.....wonderful job