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Fecund gardens growing mysteriously fast
In the youthful spring revived beneath the
Rapid cascades liquid diamonds of the mind;
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Melodies are still alluring with euphoric rhythms Yet to be danced upon, on romantic nights; The spume of the sea yet to purify, to humidify The imaginings of lovers entwined at sunset-time............... I am not competent enough to analyze a surrealist poem. Man quickly grows out of the beautiful carefree days of childhood into the vulnerable fragility of old age.
A matured verse! All the three parts are equally beautiful and distinctly expressed with wonderful choice of diction....brilliantlly composed! Top marks
But still there remains a number of unsated yearnings and longings that lie in the mind as pleasant dreams. I can only say that this poem is too deep for my analysis and the diction..... superb! Top marks