Wanderings (Surrealist Poem) Comments

But still there remains a number of unsated yearnings and longings that lie in the mind as pleasant dreams. I can only say that this poem is too deep for my analysis and the diction..... superb! Top marks

Melodies are still alluring with euphoric rhythms Yet to be danced upon, on romantic nights; The spume of the sea yet to purify, to humidify The imaginings of lovers entwined at sunset-time............... I am not competent enough to analyze a surrealist poem. Man quickly grows out of the beautiful carefree days of childhood into the vulnerable fragility of old age.

A matured verse! All the three parts are equally beautiful and distinctly expressed with wonderful choice of diction....brilliantlly composed! Top marks