Thursday, October 15, 2015

Wandering Through The Wreckage Comments

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I see your rage,
Like taillights in the distance,
And purple mountains crashing,
In a thick void.
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Crystal Rosser
purple Mountains
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Liza Sudina 15 October 2015

all your 3 strophes begin with I. it makes you very concentrated on your own - maybe sad feelings. try to write beginning with you - and depression will fly away!

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Crystal Rosser 15 October 2015

I do see the repetition there. I felt it was intentionally concentrated to create the depth and cyclic pattern of sadness. Thanks for the feedback.

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Crystal Rosser

Crystal Rosser

Alabama
Crystal Rosser
Crystal Rosser
Alabama
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