her bleeding feet callused
wandering lost for so long
this vacant soul searching
longing to finally belong.
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As always the background was dark with pale write to bold the words and meaning....some red foot print cokor your steps while you wondering in this nice poetry, with a bit spirit to wander..nice job, keep wrting SG! _Unwritten Soul
Life can sometimes be such a painful journey... It can sometimes seem that we are all blind travellers on an epic journey of nothingness... Yet life's pains are merely lessons that grow the soul... You are an epic poet my friend...
Hmmm! Finally, I could not stop reading till the last word. This is wonderfully written. You have a way with words. You artfully got my eyes and mind stuck on this one. Thanks
This poem is really meaningful, unveil the broken story of the poet also in quest of solace in this world. A miracle picture is crafted throughout the poem. brilliant.
Ah there's our favorite injured soul laying it down now like no one else can. You still gor it grl. You kill me softly with the pen. Write on!
Deeply poignant and well delivered! It strikes to very heart of all that seeks solace in this world. Well done SPGrl and welcome back!
Brilliant! No doubt my dear friend, your talent is superb and it is clearly shown in every single one of your poems! I know the feeling for I wrote a poem with the same title! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC