Friday, May 21, 2010

Wandering Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

Relaxing in a lazy chair
Casuarina branches, painted on an ever blue sky
A breeze of traveling fresh air
A wondrous white cloud wanders by
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Aufie Zophy
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Cristina Teodor 02 December 2011

Great imagery, melodious verses creating a peaceful atmosphere..Cristina Teodor

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Jinal Oswal 15 September 2011

It gives a relaxed feel, as well as leaves with thoughts wandering with the clouds. Keep up the good work :)

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A dreamy poem! Ifelt the mood. Enjoyed the read. Love: D

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Onelia Avelar 25 May 2010

...Relaxing in a lazy chair.. with an only blanket - a white light cloud - very cozy atmosphere of the poem

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Gita Ashok 24 May 2010

This poem uses such beautiful imagery. After reading it, I began to see the 'wandering white wondrous cloud' in my mind. Enjoyed reading it.

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Paul Judges 24 May 2010

Delightfully written!

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2010

feel a bit lost without my wandering cloud sense of loss that you describes here is very true, write a poem with the theme sense of loss. innumerable incidents we have in life in which we feel this sense of loss. thank you for sharing. keep high ur poetic sense.

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2010

cloud is good poetic symbol...and its wandering my favourite subject... good poem Aufie...imaginative write...10

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Sreekala Sukumaran 21 May 2010

Where it will go I am clueless before long, all again is blueness I feel a bit lost without my wandering white wondrous cloud Though small its well said with beautiful meanings..especially the last two lines i liked very much can really feel it... Like to read more of your poems so keep writing....

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