Monday, June 22, 2009

Wanderer Comments

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He tries to get some sleep
but his memories are carved in too deep
For the people he left behind
they're still wandering in his mind
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Yannick Hermans
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I Am Charlie 25 June 2009

I quite like it the way it is. Except the spelling of too.

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William Rodenberg 23 June 2009

execllent concept however it is as if you a compressing a interesting idea into ill formulated ryhmes perhaps if it was written in prose style your message will be projected much more efficiently

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Alan Decara 22 June 2009

This is a good poem! Have you copyrighted or published it? You should.

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Yannick Hermans

Yannick Hermans

Bornem, Belgium
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