Wednesday, October 10, 2007

Wand'Ring Comments

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With a troubled mind, I wander
the streets aimlessly,
Through my void,
I float along lazily.
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David N. Degnan
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Lee Degnan 21 October 2007

Ah my lovely son, if you only knew what I know in my heart to be true.... you are more valuable than you think or give yourself credit for, and I hope that this beautifully written poem is not a reflection of what you really feel, but rather, what I know to be your influences I see imbued in your writes... you have the power within to make great things happen, and therefore, your self worth will never be found within another person. You will always meet the people you need to at different points in your life, true... but even the most significant can only enhance what you already are. My love to you always.

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Evaughn Gray 20 October 2007

being needed..something everybody searches for..a purpose..meaning in this lonely life that we live in.to be wanted....is what i search for..but anyway this was a very good poem i truly loved it..alot..this was a really great peom that many can relate to..~hazel

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David N. Degnan

David N. Degnan

Peekskill, NY
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