Monday, August 28, 2006

Walls Of Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

A city contained by walls of emotion
A story told is an emotion sold
to envision the release of the caged
would be worth the price of fine gold
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Geoff Warden
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Goldy Locks 30 August 2006

this one is my favorite. for the rhythm you got going. especially liked the first two lines - thought the last pair 'a lines could be stronger tho. the citadel imagery je received from this was voracious. xGLx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 August 2006

THE SUSPENSE IS BUILDING...CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED THIS ONE...I WENT FROM 1 TO 3...NOW IM SPOT-ON AGAIN'''''''''''''''''FJR

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Geoff Warden

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