Monday, April 20, 2009

Walls I'Ve Built Comments

Rating: 5.0

i love how the things, you let go of
slowly crawl back to your side
and question your ways
you made the decision for a reason
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taylor wiebe
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Kale Beaudry 01 May 2009

Everyone has walls to some degree. Some are higher. Some are stronger. Some people trap themselves in their own walls and become an isolation... make sure those walls don't grow too tall, too strong. Each brick should be made with knowing as opposed to pure stone. Very nice.

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Angel Wings 20 April 2009

I have built walls around me and I totally understand what this poem is all about you have done a awesome job written this I really enjoy reading this I gave it a 10

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left alone and forgotten 20 April 2009

beautiful metaphor i enjoyed it alot! ! keep writing unique

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