Monday, February 25, 2019

Walls Have Ears Comments

Rating: 4.5

The words echo, walls have ears
Echoes around the centuries not absurd
My Pisces ways have me believing
From childhood to where I am today
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Mahtab Bangalee 10 February 2020

Laughter is slowly fading but I can hear I utter some words then hear a closing door/// beautiful poem penned; nice imaginative atmosphere is used to write the poem; walk slowly observe the standing wall lonely; feel the whispering of wall oh no ghostly wall can speak but silently!

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Jane Campion 04 August 2019

Just a wonderful poem of childhood. So well presented to us. Thank you John.

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John Ahern 22 August 2019

Thank you for taking the time to read the poem and your kind comment.

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Lyn Paul 01 August 2019

Wonderfully written. Your childhood sounded exciting. Dreaming is a great link for rarely being sad. Expecting good things can happen.

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John Ahern 03 August 2019

Hi Lyn, thank you for commenting. I have an imaginary book titled memories, every page waiting for its turn.

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Jennifer Birchall 16 March 2019

Sometimes imagination is what kept us going. Fantastic poen dear John.

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Always thankful for my imagination, it did indeed keep me going, thank you.

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Castellenas John 16 March 2019

A great writer. Made the reader believe and see.

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for your kind comment.

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Kim Barney 16 March 2019

Love it! Imaginary friends... what childhood memories this evokes! Congrats on poem of the day!

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for your congratulations, memories always available.

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Amir Marandi 16 March 2019

Insightful. Congrats be the POD. Thanks for sharing.

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and commenting.

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Harley White 16 March 2019

Marvelous flow of evocative memories so many of us can relate to... poetically expressed... enjoyed your poem of the day...

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you so much for expressing enjoyment when reading the poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 March 2019

Mostly childhood memories are all sweet and beautiful. That is the most happy period of one's life. So when it comes to mind one gets emotional and wish to be back to that careless time. 'I feel I have deserted them these friends of mine On occasions when waking from dreams Laughter is slowly fading but I can hear I utter some words then hear a closing door..'is awesome lines. Congrats.

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for your comments, just like a close friend, memories never desert us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 March 2019

Echoes of love and life! ! Echoes of a new day; Walls have ears. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for your comments, to share is a joy.

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Now later in life as I think of these times I feel I have deserted them these friends of mine wonderful experience. Congrats being POD

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, they return when I need them.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 March 2019

A fantastic poem of the day, sir John. Congrats for being chosen.....10+++++++++++

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John Ahern 16 March 2019

Thank you for your congratulations on my poem.

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Geoffrey Fafard 25 February 2019

Our past younger lives come back to haunt us sometimes clear as a diamond stream, like a movie of our past plying out in memory. John this is a fantastic recollective poem and reminds me of my boyhood so much. Thanks for the jolt.! ! ! ! Cheers Geoffrey.

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John Ahern 25 February 2019

Hi Geoffrey, your comments about my poems are as entertaining as the descriptive way your poems always take me there.

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