Walls Closing In Comments

Nightmares, galore! Nicely presented.

wow i was interested from the first line to the end! its like reading a great book you never want to put down! its really good. just watch spelling and typos keep the good work coming!

All I can say, is Wow. This poem is big. You should keep writing.

Yup.... same situation here.

ll the sudden i opem my eyes to see itr was nothing but a dream. As the feeling of relief comes upon m good to read

hey sweety i hope you no i love ya your to cool of a person just to give it up you have a lot to live for love your poem

Incredible! I reacted with this poem as if I were in the same situation, you conveyed your story of your dream through little words for me it take a while for reacting with this moment and live in it, amazing poem, a gr8 piece of work :)