Sunday, June 21, 2015

Walls Comments

Rating: 3.5

Brick after brick,
a barrier builds,
a concrete curtain falls
against all that you will never see again.
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Stephani Kievaughan 21 September 2015

the writer really spent some time self analyzing or Looking into a mirror for this one. good work Nishtha I am beginning to think you might make a great psychiatrist one day.

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Nishtha Trivedi 22 September 2015

Thank you! :) I really appreciate it!

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Nishtha Trivedi 22 September 2015

Wow, thank you very much! :) Really appreciate it.

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Chirag Rai 28 June 2015

A day when trust pours like rain, a gift of loneliness, I loved these two lines. A very good poem.

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strong feelings and thoughts are bricks and poetic symbols and imagery the mortar. The wall is up and it is beautiful. This one, Well written, Nishtha.

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