Saturday, December 6, 2014

Walls Comments

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Walls are everywhere in every life
Do we let them close us in
Or do we have the courage
To open the door and walk through
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Darlene Walsh
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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

Excellent poem about self-imposed barriers. Some barriers are good but as stated so nicely in the poem, let us make at least a small door in each of our walls

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Amitava Sur 04 January 2015

It's a lovely penning on realization. She or he who is conscious about this wall is able to build a proper life....... very nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 December 2014

Nice poem strength from within that shall offer you win look around and go ahead you shall be surely lead

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 06 December 2014

Strength to move ahead Courage for the first step Bravery to save your heart Hope that brings in light An optimistic poem on barriers and barricades around life and power and strength to encounter them I ejoyed it Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Darlene Walsh

Darlene Walsh

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