Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Walls Comments

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Walls are built
to keep others out.
Though our walls are built
to keep the pain inside.
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Brian Hinckley
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 February 2010

dearly and wonderfully penned

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 10 February 2010

Just a question, was the word 'aim' not 'ram'? (second stanza) . The idea is very good, 'walls' being a common human defense mechanism, and the words you used were effective in conveying the message.

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