Thursday, December 4, 2008

Walls Comments

Rating: 5.0

</>I am walking in the street
It was early morning
Both sides are huge walls
They brushed it as white
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Vinod Kumar U K
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Adeline Foster 27 July 2011

What a tenderly compassionate poem. Yes, the world lives within walls. Adeline

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

All are safe and secured At last I realised the truth All are slavers inside Rachel Ann Butler

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Ency Bearis 20 December 2008

great narrative poem..interesting... Ency Bearis

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Marria Attar 17 December 2008

Very interesting piece..Great Work!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 December 2008

Mind imprisoned in dogma's wall Which is taller than tallest wall No wonder human race is rushing towards disaster's nigra fall Good work.

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Fiona Davidson 06 December 2008

Well written Vinoduk...thanks for sharing this...

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Vinod Kumar U K

Vinod Kumar U K

kannur-kerala-India
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