Wallflower Comments

'A lonely flower, standing on the edge of the pot.' 'It never leaves the shadows, as if it wants to, it can't be seen.' especially liked these lines, you could write some much with them

It never leaves the shadows, as if it wants to, it can't be seen. The others keep on saying don't mind it, 'cause it will always remain a wallflower. a very fine poem. tony

A flower is a flower and will always be beautiful. The flower must feel it's own beauty inside and not depend on someone to tend to it. But the feeling I'm getting from the poem is that it is feeling deprived and unimportant. Good start..keep writing.