Wallace Stevens On His Way To Work Comments

I really liked this poem. I have a quibble with diction. “Bums” to my hear sounds wrong given language in the rest of the poem.

Along the path and the sidewalk, well on his way To readjusting the business of the earth.

I found a quote by David Wagoner that might shed some light on his poetry style: The more experience I have and the older I get, the more I seem to recognize the correlation between what a poet does and what a trained singer does. There are many connections between singing a song right and making a poem right.

This poem should be resubmitted, typed so that it can be read.

Very interesting poem about, arguably, the greatest poet of the 20th century.