Thursday, May 21, 2020

Wall Paper Comments

Rating: 5.0

Entered a room of white walls,

The room didn't appear beautiful,
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Diane Montemayor 14 December 2020

Very romantic poem... thanks for sharing

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It is always love that makes all the walls around us bright and beautiful. I bought a portrait of a beautiful bride, My heart vibrated by the beats of a ring, Realized, it's love that made the walls ringing, ........beautiful and romantic.....10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 May 2020

bought a portrait of a beautiful bride, My heart vibrated by the beats of a ring, Realized, it's love that made the walls ringing, Realized, it's a real bride that can make it singing. I EXPERIENCED THIS @18 YOU JA SIR are 76? ? ? may be

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A lovely poem. Very heartwarming. Yes, our loved ones will make our hearts beat. Beautifully crafted write.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 May 2020

My heart vibrated by the beats of a ring, Realized, it's love that made the walls ringing, Realized, it's a real bride that can make it singing.....realization comes there as love....nice

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