O God, it is broken, scattered, smoked and rusted now,
It has lost your determined melody, chunk & rhyme;
Yes, for wellness, to do something it seems the high time,
So tell my comrades, not to take it as my false & feared vow.
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Sonnet is almost an extinct animal now-a days. Very very tough indeed. Sometimes I tried but not satisfied. However good piece of writing.Though I'm not fully satisfied. Yet 7 for you.
thank you very much...you are right......really it is tough to continue the emotion to a conclusion I am really glad and happy you read it and comment.......
Society. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.