Thursday, July 7, 2011

Walking Through The Rain Comments

Rating: 4.4

Once in our lifetime
will go through a narrow road
where there's nobody around
We just walking all alone
...
Read full text

Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2017

For always i trust my believe for a chance The reason why i keep walking through the heavy rain Cause i know there's always something i will gain at the end A future with a rainbow will prove there's a chance and change Cause I know the sun will rise and shine again So i have made a decision through the rain Even though i know storm will appear again I will keep walking and stand again. .. loved these lines. This poem brings a great challenge in life to sustain. Astutely and hauntingly presented. Thank u dear Soul for posting this gem.

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

Beautifully Done! ! ! And So Well Put! ! ! Such Moving Imagery! ! ! Very Heart Touching! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! Saved To Favorites! ! ! 10S!

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

Wet! ! But still moving on with the muse of hope. Nice piece of work.

0 0 Reply
Frank James Davis 12 April 2013

Composed with unique style and distinguished by much wisdom, this strongly inspirational piece certainly delivers the poetic goods. Outstanding, Soul!

0 0 Reply
Harindhar Reddy 31 October 2011

Kudos! What perfect start to a poem. We rarely come across such good lines.................... Once in our lifetime will go through a narrow road where there's nobody around We just walking all alone Amazing simply superb poem. great going... carry on. Hope very soon you will laurels for your poems.... High Five to the poet with perfect rating 10++++++

0 0 Reply
Stefanie Fontker 05 September 2011

A very beautiful piece. You talent is astonishing. Great poetry.

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 04 September 2011

An amazing poem truly amazing thankyou for Your comments on my poem.

0 0 Reply
Peace Okhomina 17 August 2011

This is a lovly poem that carries a message of hope it gives encouragment and has a way of capturing the mind of the reader...NICE POEM

0 0 Reply

hey lil soul, a touching write, friends unite in storms of life, lil bro-G.G.

0 0 Reply
Shadow Girl 08 July 2011

hey US - this was beautiful - SG

0 0 Reply
Rekha Mandagere 08 July 2011

Beautiful message is conveyed. I truly experienced walking on the narrow road alone finding something great even inspite of hardships and terrible thunderstorms. When once I reached the last stanza, I found the confidence to lead life facing all challenges.Great work. I give full 10 Marks for this deeply philosophical poem.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success