Once in our lifetime
will go through a narrow road
where there's nobody around
We just walking all alone
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Beautifully Done! ! ! And So Well Put! ! ! Such Moving Imagery! ! ! Very Heart Touching! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! Saved To Favorites! ! ! 10S!
Wet! ! But still moving on with the muse of hope. Nice piece of work.
Composed with unique style and distinguished by much wisdom, this strongly inspirational piece certainly delivers the poetic goods. Outstanding, Soul!
Kudos! What perfect start to a poem. We rarely come across such good lines.................... Once in our lifetime will go through a narrow road where there's nobody around We just walking all alone Amazing simply superb poem. great going... carry on. Hope very soon you will laurels for your poems.... High Five to the poet with perfect rating 10++++++
A very beautiful piece. You talent is astonishing. Great poetry.
An amazing poem truly amazing thankyou for Your comments on my poem.
This is a lovly poem that carries a message of hope it gives encouragment and has a way of capturing the mind of the reader...NICE POEM
hey lil soul, a touching write, friends unite in storms of life, lil bro-G.G.
Beautiful message is conveyed. I truly experienced walking on the narrow road alone finding something great even inspite of hardships and terrible thunderstorms. When once I reached the last stanza, I found the confidence to lead life facing all challenges.Great work. I give full 10 Marks for this deeply philosophical poem.
For always i trust my believe for a chance The reason why i keep walking through the heavy rain Cause i know there's always something i will gain at the end A future with a rainbow will prove there's a chance and change Cause I know the sun will rise and shine again So i have made a decision through the rain Even though i know storm will appear again I will keep walking and stand again. .. loved these lines. This poem brings a great challenge in life to sustain. Astutely and hauntingly presented. Thank u dear Soul for posting this gem.