Walking Through Myself Comments

I once met a sadhu, who said that the Universe was within... yes, you have captured your sense of Self beautifully here John.... xxPenny

John, I like this a lot!

A fantastic introspection. The imagery and flow are quite moving, and cause the reader to question their own sense of self. I enjoyed this and yet felt a tinge of sadness as I read it. I wonder if that is what you wanted to portray? One point, the 9th line from the bottom, so many things you should to us...is there a word missing? Thank you for this lovely work, I certainly liked it very much. Jazzy x